Showing posts with label Week 9. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 9. Show all posts

Thursday, March 24, 2016

Storytelling Week 9: The Choice

Im writing this story from prison. My name is Bhima. My brothers and I are also locked in here except Yudhishthira and Nakula. I cannot express how angry I feel right now Brahmin. After we helped you retrieve your belongings everything went south!  I hope that you come visit me soon!

This is Brahmin. I will tell you guys the story of the Pandavas and their obstacles of their lives.
I met the Pandavas about 2 years ago. I was a forest man. I lived off of the forest for years. I was abandoned by my parents in the forest when I was ten. It was hard for me to survive this long. When my parent left me they had left a family picture in my back pocket. I have carried that picture with me my whole life. One day I was bathing in the Oklahoma River and as I was coming out of the water I saw a deer messing with my cloths. He saw me coming out of the water and shot off with my pants stuck to one of his antlers.
I mourned the loss of my picture. It was all I had of my family. I walked around the forest for days searching for this deer and one day I stumbled across a group of men. They were the Pandavas. They were a group of five brothers called Yudhishthira, Bhima, Nakula, Arjuna, and Sahadeva. They had been exiled from their kingdom and have been rooming the forest fro years. I told them what had happened to me and I explained. They told me they would be glas to help. I was full of excitement because people normally do not approach me but these guys were more than glad to help me!
The search began as soon as possible. We searched for days and finally we found the dear. The brothers all chased him for hours. While the brothers were running after the deer we noticed that Yudhishthira did not not bother chasing after it. He just watched. The brothers finally caught it but accidently killed it. No one really cared. To them it was just a deer.
                  The four brothers and I celebrated but then we heard yells coming from nearby. It was an old man and he had asked who had killed the deer. We admitted to it and we did not realize that it is illegal and punishable for 50 years to kill a deer.
                  We all went to prison but I was let out because the Pandavas explained how it was me who killed the deer. I was let out and the first thing I did was look for Yudhishthira. I found him and he told me he only had money to bail one brother. He thought about who to let out for a few days and decided it would be Nakula. The brothers were infuriated and had promised to revenge their brother’s betrayal.
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Author’s note

                  This story seems different from the more common version of the story of the Pandavas. This version of the story actually mentions and focus the other two brothers Nakula and Sahadeva. This is the first time I actually hear other brothers other than Yudhishthira, Bhima, and Arjuna. This comic begins with the Pandavas in the forest exiled from their kingdom. Their first obstacle is to regain some sticks important to the Brahmin from a golden deer who has managed to run off with them. The Pandavas chase the deer for a long period of time. They were very thirsty after the chase and needed to find water. Finding water was also an obstacle. One brother found a lake first and was advised by a deity not to drink or they would die. Consecutively one brother by one kept drinking and dying. The only one who survived was Yuhishthira. He eventually was given the choice to bring back one brother and he chose Nakula because Nakula and Sahadeva are from a different mom and he thought it was best that one of them should live.  In my story I didn’t not necessarily kill them but in prison them to represent that Yudhishthira chose Nakula above the other brothers

Wednesday, March 23, 2016

Week 9 Reading Diary: Tales of Yudhishthira:Justice for the Pandavas


My reading diary is over “Tales of Yudhishthira: Justice for the Pandava.” This tale starts of different from the original stories we have read in class about the Pandavas. This one seemed like it went straight to the exile portion of the story. Which will give me the opportunity to give my story a different beginning from the usual. The first main situation that occurs in this story is when the Pandavas are in the forest and they decide to help the Brahmin chase a deer. Another thing that really caught my attention about this story is that it names all of the other Pandavas such as Nakula and Sahadeva. This allows me to add more characters other than Arjuna, Bhima, and Yudhihthira. I would like to focus on the story where the brother die when drinking from a prohibited fountain leaving Yudhishthira.I usually make the stories about the Pandavas have to do with a gambling issue. This time I want to create an internal dispute between the brothers such as making them fight over Yudhishthira choosing to bring back only one brother back to life. I would also include how Nakula and Sahadeva are from different moms which is why Yudhishthira chose to bring back Nakula. In this story they also have Duryodhana but I would rather have him out of my story this week simply because he has always been the bad guy in the rest of my stories. I will include the reunion of Yudhishthira and his brothers in heaven.

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