Showing posts with label Week 3. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 3. Show all posts

Saturday, February 6, 2016

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Topic

My Story book will deal with animals. After reading the Public Domain Edition of Ramayana I decided to also include the topic of brotherhood. I had done research over Jatayu and Sampati who are flying animals which are brothers. Sampati gave up his ability to fly in order to save his brother Jatayu. The Ramayana also gave me two more characters that I am very interested in. I would also like to include Hanuman and his brother Surgiva. They both took part in helping Rama win back his love, Siti, as long as Rama help defeat Surgiva’s brother. I have found multiple stories of Hanuman where as a young king he was abusive with his powers. There are also stories about Hanuman fighting an elephant due to his ability to grow in size. In my storybook I plan on having Jatayu amd Sampati go into combat with Surgiva and Hanuman.
Hanuman Abusing his Powers: Sanatan Society 


Bibliography
  1. "Public Domain Edition of the Ramayana". Website: Blogpost
  2. Peter Marchand. "The Life of Hanuman". Website: Santan Society  
  3. "Jatayu". Website: Wikipedia
  4. "Sampati". Website: Wikipedia
Styles


Love Story. I want to incorporate a battle between these two groups where one brother defends the other. I might add a woman character come in between one of the four characters but another one will also be in love causing a dispute. I will add a big battle in between where only one of the four brothers will come out alive. I definitely want this story to revolve over a battle but I am not sure what kind of ending I want. I will use one specific power or characteristic that each character has that will stand out in this battle.

Family Story. I had the idea of adding inner family problems. For example, Sampti or Hanuman would be the preferred brothers by their mothers. I am not entirely sure how I would in corporate a battle between the brothers. I might have to separate battles between the brothers but with different endings.

Race. One of my favorite hobbies is to watch horse races. I may add a story about a race in which the two set of brothers have to race to get complete control over an abandoned kingdom. The brothers will have a trail of obstacles in their way which the brothers will also spend the race trying to get in the way of the other brother’s race.

Bull riding. My absolute favorite hobby is bull riding. I have done it a couple times but nothing like the professionals! It is something that I am strongly considering. I want to have the four characters ride the bull and only the two who last the longest will escape the prison in which they reside. I may actually have the bull they ride be Nandi, Shiva’s personal vehicle.

Tuesday, February 2, 2016

Storytelling Week 3: Rama's Win and Defeat

Rama, son of a well loved king is in search of his love, Siti. He has encounter multiple battles with his foe Ravana. Ravana has captured his woman and is now on a mission to find her.
Rama and his brother Lakshmana go deep into the forest in search for help. They come across two monkey kings named Surgiva and Hanuman. These monkeys offer their help with one condition. They ask Rama and his brother for help fighting their brother Vali. Rama promises to help. They go deeper into the forest to find the kingdom of Vali. They began a battle in which Vali is dominating. Rama at first stands behind a shrub ready to attack Vali from behind when he is not looking. Rama jumps out of the bush and stabs Vali in the back. The monkey king screams in great pain as he lays there bleeding. Surgiva and Hanuman are infuriated with Rama because he did not give their brother a fighting chance. Rama confused begins to panic because he is surrounded. He did not understand the code by which these monkeys lived. Rama and the two monkey kings began to battle. The monkey kings did not know exactly who Rama was. From the forest an army of bears sent by the Gods to help Rama began to engage in battle with the army of the monkeys. They fought for days until they decided to call it an end. Rama apologized for what he had done and explained that he had no idea that the monkeys only fought if both opponents had an even match. The monkey Gods forgave him mainly because of the appreciation the Gods had for Rama. The monkey kings and Rama make peace.
They continue their search for Siti but are lost in the darkness of the forest. They come across a cave where a large bird comes jumping out ready to attack. Rama explains that they do not come to fight and explains why they are deep in the woods. The bird is named Sampti. He lost his ability to fly but has amazing vision and hearing. He explains to Rama that he is able to hear a young woman cry every night hoping that a man named Rama could rescue her. He explains to Rama he has seen the kingdom of Ravana, where Siti resides, thousands of miles within the forest.
Rama and his army head out in the direction that Sampti told them. They traveled by foot for many months losing soldiers along the way. They finally spot the kingdom of Ravana but it is disconnected from the forest. There is a dark hole that separates the lands.It stretch’s more than ten miles long. Angered, Rama begins to shot arrows into the sky. He does not have the ability to jump or make it across this gap. Hanuman explains to him that he might be able to jump. Rama and the army watch him as he makes the leap. Hanuman told Rama he would go into the palace to find Siti’s exact location.
Once Hanuman is in the castle of Ravana he finds Siti. Before he can make it into the room a guard captures him and take him to Ravana. Ravana, angered begins to torture Hanuman until he tells him why he snuck into the castle. Hanuman does not tell him anything. Ravana decided to set the monkey’s tail on fire. Little did Ravana know that Hanuman had a great army waiting outside his kingdom. As Hanuman’s tail began to burn he let out a loud scream which Rama and the army were able to hear.
Rama and the army had no idea how to make it across the large gap until the gods sent down a bronze latter that could get them across the border. Immediately Rama and his army crossed into the kingdom beginning a battle with the guards of the kingdom. Ravana immediately ask for the help of his brother Kumbhakarna who is a man who is one hundred feet tall. Rama and his army are surprised by the size of this man. They shoot arrows at him but nothing is able to go through him. This is when they hear a loud grunt from the sky. Everyone looks up and sees a large monkey coming down. This was Hanuman who was given this power by the Gods for his pain. The monkey and Kumbhakarna engaged in battle leaving Kumbhakarna dead. At the last moments of the battle Rama and Ravana face off. They fought until they were both weak but Rama managed to give the determining strike. Ravana has died and Rama has captured Siti.
Ravana is killed by Rama and his brother: BlogSpot

Rama and the army depart, heading their separate ways. Rama returns to his father’s kingdom to take his throne. Years pass and the city begins to express their hatred towards Siti. They do not trust her because they have heard rumors that she willingly left Rama to go with another man. This was not true. Ravana had kidnapped her in order to get revenge for Rama killing his brother and embarrassing his sister. Rama feels forced to exile Siti back into the forest. Rama grieves daily because of what he has done. His two sons chose to leave with their mother. Years go by and the sons return to their fathers kingdom with an army of men. They engage in battle only to defeat their father’s army. Rama’s sons capture his brother Lakshmana and murder him in front of the gates of the castle. Sadden by what has happened Rama decides to take away his life. He has departed from this world to live in the heavens with his father and brother.



Authors note: This story is based on the Public Domain Edition of the Ramayan part C and D. In these episodes Rama encounters the monkey kings who help him through out the way. They originally do not engage in battle with Rama. Hanuman does not transform into a giant beast to fight Ravana’s enormous brother. I thought it would be a good battle to have two giants fight. Ravana is not easily defeated by Rama. He is killed by the help of Lakshmana and the chariot of a God sent down to help Rama. The brothers do not kill Rama’s brother for revenge or go into the kingdom starting a battle.

Week 3 Reading Diary: Public Domain Edition of Ramayana part D


Part D of the Public Domain Edition of the Ramayana starts of with Rama and Hanuman trying to cross over to the Kingdom of Lanka where it is presumed that Siti resides. Hanuman is able to make the great leap between the kingdoms but the monkey army and Rama have to cross over. So the monkeys and Rama build a bridge in order to get to the other side. I will alter this scene by adding danger to the bridge building process. They go into battle with Ravana once again only to have lost him and Siti once again. Ravana’s son Indrajit is the cause for the lose in this battle. I will keep this original scene. The wounded fighters on the side of Rama are healed by a deity named Garuda. From what I understand and the research I have done Garuda is a bird like human/creature that has healing powers. I am actually interested in doing more research about him for my own project. The character Kumbhakarna is a fascinating character! I will for sure have him in my story. Ravana has the power of illusions and tries to create a scenario where Siti and him have bounded so that Rama can leave them alone but Rama does not accept that. I will probably alter this scene. On episode 67 Ravana’s son has finally been defeated by Rama’s brother. I will also keep this scene. In my story Ravana will seek revenge for his brothers death hurting Siti in front of Rama. Rama enraged will engage in combat with the aid of the Gods sending down Indra’s chariot. Rama eventually defeats Ravana and his wife laments her husbands death. In my story she will seek revenge by attacking Siti. She will fail and Rama and Siti will once again be together. They will return to the kingdom of Ayodhya where Rama is set to become king. His younger brother has been waiting for his arrival to exchange the crown. The town was not fond of Siti. Rama feels forced to exile her. In my story Siti and Rama’s children will seek vengeance against their father for what the did to their mother. They will engage in a battle killing Rama’s brothers. Saddened by his brother’s lose he leaves everything to go to the heavens with his brother.
Ravana is killed by Rama and his Brother:BlogSpot